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I’m coming back
From the place that she sent me
When I didn’t know my worth
Teeter at the tip
Wait for the wind to help me fly
I was alone, still am
Break my walls down, help me feel
I’ve been gone for far too long
I carve a pit, you carve yourself
I waver, you never looked back
But I escaped and you stayed
I know I’ll always be okay
And you build your wall, I’ll break it down
Can’t let you stay there so long
I’ve been there, I got out alive
It’s okay, you go on and cry
My shoulder can bear the weight of tears
Unload it all on me, dear
So build your wall, babe, it won’t hold me
Your pain will be gone, hold on.
I will do anything for you.
From the place that she sent me
When I didn’t know my worth
Teeter at the tip
Wait for the wind to help me fly
I was alone, still am
Break my walls down, help me feel
I’ve been gone for far too long
I carve a pit, you carve yourself
I waver, you never looked back
But I escaped and you stayed
I know I’ll always be okay
And you build your wall, I’ll break it down
Can’t let you stay there so long
I’ve been there, I got out alive
It’s okay, you go on and cry
My shoulder can bear the weight of tears
Unload it all on me, dear
So build your wall, babe, it won’t hold me
Your pain will be gone, hold on.
I will do anything for you.
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This is a cover of the AMAZING song Setting Sail, Coming Home. It's the end theme of an EPIC game called Bastion. I love the song and it's bee stuck in my head for a while so I decided to make a cover of it, hoping it would get out though I love it. It didn't leave but I decided to upload the cover to you all for some critique ^.^ all critique is appreciated but I'd like to know if it's linear in its plot. It's telling a story and I think the story may not be clear. This cover is also born from feelings I have. No need to be sensitive about the critique though XD just say it any old way you want.
Here's a link to the song so you can read as they sing. The first minute is just music. Also, the stanzas don't correspond exactly to the song. I switched it around a bit
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Arigatou gozaimaste!! And please, no using my work unless you ask first. Don't do anything to it otherwise.
Side note-Love, if you're reading this, it's for you. Let me know you read it via email
Here's a link to the song so you can read as they sing. The first minute is just music. Also, the stanzas don't correspond exactly to the song. I switched it around a bit
[link]
Arigatou gozaimaste!! And please, no using my work unless you ask first. Don't do anything to it otherwise.
Side note-Love, if you're reading this, it's for you. Let me know you read it via email
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