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This is actually from my heart. This is actually how I feel, what I've observed. I know it's not good at all. Whenever I write from the heart it turns out bad but whenever I fake emotion in my writing, it turns out good. I'd appreciate critique though, so please just comment and tell me what you think.
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I would also say that you shouldn't fake your poems, no matter how "good" they turn out to be.
To me poems written from the heart is always better, because they are from the heart. And even though faked poems can be "better" or "as good as" a poem written from the heart, I will always prefer real ones.
But I agree with you on most of the things in this poem. Most guys frustrates me, because all they look at is; boobs, ass, face, legs, how skinny you are etc. They don't care much of what kind of girl you are. As long as you show your body, they will like you
But there are guys out there that is not like that. Of course some of them think of sex, but in what I'd call a "natural way". It's not all they think of, but they think of it now and then, like some girls can.
I'm glad that I have the boyfriend I have now :3 We have been together for 2 years now
And he is not that kind of a guy, which is one thing I really like about him 
So I really like your poem, because I can relate to it a lot~
I hope you keep on writing poems from your heart ^^
To me poems written from the heart is always better, because they are from the heart. And even though faked poems can be "better" or "as good as" a poem written from the heart, I will always prefer real ones.
But I agree with you on most of the things in this poem. Most guys frustrates me, because all they look at is; boobs, ass, face, legs, how skinny you are etc. They don't care much of what kind of girl you are. As long as you show your body, they will like you
But there are guys out there that is not like that. Of course some of them think of sex, but in what I'd call a "natural way". It's not all they think of, but they think of it now and then, like some girls can.
I'm glad that I have the boyfriend I have now :3 We have been together for 2 years now
And he is not that kind of a guy, which is one thing I really like about him So I really like your poem, because I can relate to it a lot~
I hope you keep on writing poems from your heart ^^